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| Calliope Veronica 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseDepressing... it's nice to think that relationships will last forever, but they rarely do. I like the idea and set-up of this. .:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:. |
| chaos called creation 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the title. The poem was nicely written. |
| ayadora 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseyeah. the repetitive lines add to the ritual thing and how afraid we are to take chances. And I like the morning/mourning thing. very nice. |
| M. R. Smale 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful and unique, the repetition really drives home the point as well. Keep up the great work! |
| les petits bateaux 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, I simply adore your repetition of different kinds of rituals in the same day. Good work. ~~Trinity |