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Reviews For: Morning Tea Rituals

Calliope Veronica
2006-06-12
ch 1,
abuseDepressing... it's nice to think that relationships will last forever, but they rarely do.

I like the idea and set-up of this.

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
chaos called creation
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI love the title. The poem was nicely written.
ayadora
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abuseyeah. the repetitive lines add to the ritual thing and how afraid we are to take chances. And I like the morning/mourning thing. very nice.
M. R. Smale
2005-12-08
ch 1,
abuseVery powerful and unique, the repetition really drives home the point as well. Keep up the great work!
les petits bateaux
2005-12-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful, I simply adore your repetition of different kinds of rituals in the same day. Good work.

~~Trinity
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