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| Jon Emery 2006-01-20 ch 1,   | Loving the attention to detail, even if the plot is slightly elusive. The situation itself is creepy, I suppose - but that might just be because I hate it when other people are in control, and Beryl seems to be the one holding all the cards in this piece. Am I right? |