i could really relate to this. Brilliant job with descriptions, especially in the beginning.

ANNA

good one.. you really did capture how one feels at times... i really liked the sort of "confession" and factual feel of the piece... keep it up... ;D

cool. u said u'd mess it up or smth, but u didn't! its good. i could picture it in my mind and feel it. u dont try too hard, and its easy to understand. simple.