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| Chris Conway 2006-05-04 ch 1,   | This was cool. |
| brittle hearts 2005-11-29 ch 3, | I can see the storyline is getting more interesting! Please update. :) |
| Bitter.Sweet.Endings 2005-11-29 ch 3, | coolness... |
| Bitter.Sweet.Endings 2005-11-29 ch 1, | ok. great, but one thing "my hazel orbs" should be "my hazel eyes". I know you were trying to create a different word for it, but once you call one thing an "orb" don't call anything else that until you're sure you've stopped talking about it. For a few paragraphs, at least. other than that, it was utterly AMAZING!:P |
| LINKed up 2005-11-29 ch 3, | Interesting, very interesting. While I don't get the title as of yet, I am sure that it will all be explained in due time. By the way, your story is the first that I have ever read on here on FictionPress, so you can be happy. I hope to be able to read more of this story, as it is very well writen. |
| Bita-chan 2005-11-29 ch 3, | YAY! I love this story (I think you know that by now) but it is well written and, there's hints of good character growth.~Lots of love, Lita~ |