Reviews for The Lands of Toroth

EMichelleR
2005-12-06
ch 1,

nice story! i love it! it caught my attention early on!! You gave very good descriptions, have a terrific story line full of imagination, and came up with great names for the countries and such!!

Your had very little spelling mistakes.

Please continue this story and your other ones. I can't wait to read ur next update.

FYI- Plz don't think that i have given up on my story. I haven't. It is just taking me a while to get a good enough chapter to upload until I can revise if more.

florida
2005-11-29
ch 1,

Hiya!!

I really enjoyed this, and can't wait until you write some more of it. The summery was pretty well put together too!

Here's some grammer/spelling mistake that I found:

mistake 1:'Though witchcraft and evil deeds Geltoran has stayed alive.' Here i think you ment through.

mistake 2: ' and bringing their families and friends begin the long process of populating this land.' This sentence is a little confiseing. Maybe you ment something like this, and brining their families and friends, they started the process...

YOu better hurry and write some more!

~florida

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