This is very, very good. I think that tha line 'it could've been anybody's body, anyone's future, anyone's dreams; instead, it is your life spattered across the canvas...' really sums up this poem. It is something that could be said about so many people, and yet it is only about one. Really provoking.

>strength-face fear

the perfection in this comes from how you are tearing the words straight from your heart.god i remember such similar endless days and hate that you have them now. just keep writing.

mezzie

this is a stunning tribute. gorgeous wording. i love it.

I'm stunned. Beautifully written.

*blinks* you are an amazing poet. This deeply moved me, though clearly I have no idea who you are talking about, I feel I should miss them too...devastating...you have an astonishing way with words...this is absolutely brilliant. I can't possible write a proper review, seeing as this is simply perfect...*fave stories* Love, Mia

my god. this stole my breath. i'm so sorry this happened, but somehow you have created such an artful, poignant remberance out of tragedy. this. is. beautiful.