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| elohimdancer319 2007-01-25 ch 3,  | abuseExperimenting, indeed. I like the flow though- the short sentences make it seem choppy, but it works. |
| CHIIJOY 2007-01-17 ch 3, | abuse"Beating so-fast against rib cage. The rhythm; I’ll- explode-I’ll-explode." I loved this line and your writing style. You're an originator here. Please update soon. :D |
| milenaa 2006-10-12 ch 3, | abusehey there. i liked this so far. chapters aren't incredibly long and they sill say a lot. keep writing. please. |
| TurtleGoddess 2006-08-25 ch 3, | abuseI love the style this is written is, as I said in another review, and the characters have grown on me. I really want to see what happens with them! The premise for this is just so creative, and I'd love for you to continue it! So good job, and please update soon! |
| melomaniac. 2006-07-25 ch 3, | abuseI love this story.. The writing style is awesome.. It makes you pay attention to it. |
| Silent Force 2006-07-23 ch 2, | abuseI'm still liking your writing style; it's just so original. Both of the characters intrigue me, and I'm hoping they'll see each other again. Again, I really like how you described everything. Nice work! |
| TurtleGoddess 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like the style this is written in. It's both descriptive and a good reflection of the characters' personalities. The whole set-up of meeting at a party like that is very intriguing; I'm interested as to where you'll take it. Nice job! |
| hey maria 2006-03-20 ch 3, | abuseWoah, cool, you updated. "Connected by juice. Good name for a rock band." I loved that. |
| madlyinluv (cba 2 log in lo... 2006-03-17 ch 3, anon. | abusehey awesome story! I love it ! keep going :D xoxo |
| bob 2006-03-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseaww, wow, man, i love this story! it's so sweet, and the way it's completely without proper dialouge is a really good effect. :] |
| this is my love for you 2005-12-02 ch 2, | abuseThis is so whimsical and romantic... i love it. And Le Tigre is awesome ^^ Kathleen Hanna is awesome. |
| Nonah 2005-12-02 ch 2, | abuseI like this steph. It's very original and interesting. I don't think I've ever really read anything like this. Well done! |
| fsk 2005-12-01 ch 2, anon. | abuserawr. your style is like poetry and i love it. please keep writing. |
| hey maria 2005-12-01 ch 2, | abuseSo um...are you going to write more? ::smiles charmingly:: I'm listening to a song called 'Ghosts of Princes in Towers' and it matches the mood of this story perfectly...it sounds so magical and I don't care how cliche that is. Another gorgeous chapter; and the boy sounds like someone I would stalk - ahem, I mean /like./ "Prince Charming, that’s who he is. Juggles pinecones on patios, invents goofy constellation names, popcorn catcher. Sexy music man with stupid juice stain and no ambition." Beautiful. Great job. |
| Proxy_Wonker 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseFlatter yourself as much as you want to, babe. This was awesome. The style was very descriptive, very good. I loved it. |