*sniffle* Sweet

I love the repeating lines... gives it a lil something extra I think. Anyway... good job!

i love the repition of "this is goodbye my love/this is goodbye my friend." it puts such a reminder that this isnt just some words for reading, but a message that needs to get across. truely worded beautifully. lovely.

this is neat..i think it is kinda cute! great job!

I wrote something like this once, but not really. I should post something.But this is good, you know. As always.

Ari

Good poem.