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| Ryukoji 2006-01-17 ch 1,  | abuse*sniffle* Sweet |
| Kimmi Gray 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI love the repeating lines... gives it a lil something extra I think. Anyway... good job! |
| BellonaFlayreRiver 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abusei love the repition of "this is goodbye my love/this is goodbye my friend." it puts such a reminder that this isnt just some words for reading, but a message that needs to get across. truely worded beautifully. lovely. |
| lordelfy 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abusethis is neat..i think it is kinda cute! great job! |
| Falaba Todd 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI wrote something like this once, but not really. I should post something.But this is good, you know. As always. Ari |
| Patricia Louise 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. |