Sorry it took so long to get to reviewing your work, I've been busy this last year of high school.

This is nice, it has a great deal of feeling in it, though most may not take from it that, simply because most tend to lose themselves and lose the purpose within the rhymed couplets.

Thanks for the review, and though most authors apparently die at constructive criticism, I welcome it greatly.

After all, it is the reader that knows what the reader likes. And if my ideas are being stopped short at poetic difficulties, I have no problem having them pointed out. It helps me with expressing the purpose.

Hmm, in parts I did see that the rhyming was a little forced. As many of your reviewers have said. But the word choices were beautiful. You really don't need the rhyming to express anything in your poetry. As far as I can see in this one. You get the point across without it. Is what I was trying to say. I'd had add this to my favorites list if I had anymore room! Excellent job!

I do like it, however, I think the rhyme might take some feeling away. In rhyming poems, I think of Dr. Seuss usually...

but...I do like your word choice, and I do like how it flows for the most part...but I think the rhyming puts the reader into a track of mind, and can distract from the meaning of the poem.

you have some very lovely lines, but, and i know ur going to hate me for this, the rhyme is too strict. rhyme is good, but there were spots where it seemed like the words were forced into it. this was a good poem tho.

Yes, well, thank you for the reviews. Lazee and Ewps is pretty weird, yeah, and it's close to impossible to guess that the first poem is about No Face in Spirited Away. =P

The only line that seemed off was: Children of nature stare, jaws agape. Maybe cut out "nature" to make it fit the rhythm. Also, at times, the rhyming was a little forced.

And Cliché is one of my most hated words.