It's like a glimpse into someone's stream of consciousness. Very personal and emotional. This piece is rather sad, but I admire the honesty.

Very very powerful.I liked this so much. wow... *tear and a smile that tells all.*

Wow, That is so cool. I loved it. It totally captures the concept of it all.Luvs,Your Best Friend

I absoloutely love this poem and every time i read it it gets better. I still think you should get it published because it would be accepted for sure.

that's terribly sad...i have a rocky relationship with my father myself and though i can't identify perfectly with this i know where you're coming from. beautiful piece of writing.

I like the way this reads. It is very spontanious. I found that the faster I read it, the better it sounded...if that makes any sense. Good work.

nice but simple, which works here. i like the cyclical format, fits with the spinning/round theme.

"And I feel as if the clouds are spinning

In an endless circle

Around a frozen world."

-great imagery here!

i also like the sporadic rhyming. overall, nice work.