I like it, especially since you wrote it as a person watching from a distance. Your last line was great.

hehehe..that last line is soo true... :P

hoy emi ! oh my goodness u poem writer u ! muahahaha.. that was soo moving muahaha .. im so proud of u ! wot !!

A nice lonely feel to this one.

this is so sad, really beautiful. great work.

Beautifully sad, and the last line is really intriguing, very clever. Lovely little poem that evokes a lot of feelings in such a few lines.