Your images are...vivid. Again, I love it. It's bitter, but I always was a sucker for bitter writing. Keep it up. :)

I like it , really great imagery. Very sad also.

Wow. What a perfect poem.

Absolutely amazing! Well done, I especially like the line "the laughing bastard in the moon played hide and seek with honorable intentions". It's brilliant. Keep up the good work

...Amazing. That's really all I can say. I'm at a loss... Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more from you! Going on my faves. "I scratch myself with safety pins, And cut myself with knives.I carve you name into my heart, And your initials on my thighs..." --Tears

honestly i love this piece. It rings emotionally true and tells the story of a sad girl, who lost something but yet, wanted to lose it at the same time. It tells the tale of lost love and issues with guys, which is very real. I also like the way that the Author's heart is put out on a branch here for all to see. Excellent work.

treat me like a princess, treat me like a **

-The best of both worlds I guess; deep down I think that every girl wants to feel/be treated like that. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.