Reviews for Avoiding the Moonlight

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Crysta Mayville 2008-03-27 ch 10,	abuseO... love, love, LOVED the story. So very awsome!
monkey kruncher 2007-03-23 ch 5,	abuseGood chapter. It was suspenseful, made me scared for Callum AND Seth. The werewolves are a bit freaky sounding. Teeth past its chin?! o.0 So what exactly was their plan? Was that all of it? Run blindly into the forest until they encounter the werewolves? -sigh- Once again, another great chapter that leaves me wanting to continue. PS "Callum ATE his tea quickly to avoid delay." Har har har.
monkey kruncher 2007-03-23 ch 4,	abuseSo the Albino has a name, eh? I can't wait to see what Callum has in store for those werewolves. He seems brave so far, I like that. If it were me there, I'd be running and screaming and FLAILING out of that cabin and as far away from that forest as possible. Callum's emotions were well-placed, I thought. God job with that. And I can't wait to read the next chapter.
monkey kruncher 2007-03-23 ch 3,	abuseAnd the plot thickens! This chapter was fantasic, I'd have to say. It was intriguing. I love the Jeheyain werewolves, they seem pretty interesting. I'd like to know more about them. Oh, I can't wait to read more!
monkey kruncher 2007-03-23 ch 2,	abuseGreat chapter, it makes me want to continue reading even more. I like how you kind of...'fleshed' out Callum more with the whole I-Don't-Need-A-Woman thing. Very nice. There are a couple of teeny-tiny mistakes, but they're not bothersome. Ah, cliff-hangers. They are Satan! Who's that man in the bush? And what's behind him? -sigh- I guess I have to read on to find out, huh?
monkey kruncher 2007-03-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was pretty good. I like the description of the scenery, the imagery was nice. Good job! I shall continue to read the other chapters
Midnights Scream 2007-01-10 ch 10,	abusehehehe. I likes it. Poor Callum though. He didn't ask for that especially with how Seth reacted. sniffle
Midnights Scream 2007-01-09 ch 1,	abuseHm...interesting. It sounds like it'll be good. :) Thanks for the hug! You're so sweet. I like you...in a friendship sort of way sheepish smile Don't be offend! I shall continue to read the story and review!
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-10-18 ch 10,	abuseNo way! That's illegal to finish a story like that. sighs You really should write a sequel. I'm willing to help! Hm, well, it's not as "powerful" as Undead Assassin, but it was still really good. Your wording and the fluidity you use your words in are so good. And, really, you should combine a yaoi story with something like this... I'd still be happy to help.
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-10-18 ch 9,	abuseSo many things happening all at once, it sort of confusing, but it's all so sad. I mean, he killed his own sister when he was trying to save her all this time, and now Callum is bitten...so many things that have happened have all gone bad. But I'm sure something's up, right?
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-10-18 ch 6,	abuseGeez...you picked a perfect time to stop. Well, great story so far. The suspense (...um...that is what they call it, right?) was overwhelming!
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-10-18 ch 3,	abusescowls and speaks sarcastically I hate you. You made me scared. I mean, 8ft!? And that...um...person was moving and everything, and poor Stella! And where'd you come up with Jeheyain? It sounds really pretty... Okay, to sum this up quickly: great writing, really fluid, and really, really suspeseful.
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseI'm beginning to think that you really should return to writing like this, but maybe you could add the yaoi, too? You're writing really is good, and I really, really liked how you described your sunset and how it couldn't brighten up the dark forest.
It's-Raining-Tears 2006-08-05 ch 10,	abuse... O_O Wow... That was amazing, dude... Just... Amazing...
It's-Raining-Tears 2006-08-05 ch 6,	abusefalls out of the chair HOLY HELL MAN! O_O This story is bloody amazing!

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