Reviews for No One Is Watching

leylakedi 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseWhoa...you are an amazing writer. I don't think I'd be able to describe a person or a true experience as well as you do here. This person seems absolutely real to me, and I can immediately understand your facination with her. My favorite part was the paragraph about her sunglasses. Extremely well-written. Nice job. -L-
Fiorenza 2006-03-20 ch 1,	abuseI always check out the profile of anyone who reviews something I wrote. As I was looking at yours I noticed the title and summary and thought it sounded interesting. I read it, and decided it was very interesting. You described her and watching her in a really rather fascinating way. It is the sort of description that makes a reader wonder and want to know more, but if the auther doesn't know then, unfortunately, the reader can't either.
cocacolalord 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abuseWow...I know exactly how the person feels in this story...