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Reviews For: Yours

Ruri Star Sykel 2007-03-21 ch 1,	abuseblushes CUTE! hugs writer You're amazing please keep writing! let's go of writer and skipps off (if i knew how to skip anyway...) lol
darrena 2007-01-29 ch 1,	abuseThis second story is so hot! :p I'm looking forward to the third... :)
lane 2006-09-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseis there only two?
narcissenoire 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseThis story is just so unbelievably sexy and very very hot. I also like how it offers a few more glimpses into the storyline that helps understand what's going on. But mostly I like how hot it is. Please, I'm begging you, write the next one!!
Pyreflei 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abuseDenial, then submission. Kindness and cruelty in one action. Melikes the 'methinks' and the 'meprotests.' Just remember: the opposite of love isn't hate, it's indifference.
Lauren 2005-12-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseHello there! Me again, back to tell you how much I love this part! Although it was short...then again if it was fifty pages long I still would say that. But now I've gotten to see more about why Michael is wanted dead without feeling that it took up the main storyline yet adding some intresting information as to why Christian was sent to kill him and despises him. Yet Michael says its not true so whats with that? And still Christian's reaction to being made a pet seems realistic...my mind however is still in rejoyce over the slash goodness...plus the voices in my head (that what I call my muses, it just seems to fit) seem to like it and Ameris (dark,wierd,andrognous) hates everything! Now on to nagging my favorite part! O.k. since Im not sure exactly when you plan on updating all Im going to say is please make it soon! This is a really awesome story and its hard to some across such quality. That and keep writing in general, you're great at it and there's a lack of yaoi goodness here!
chibi-jinx 2005-12-01 ch 1,	abuseAw, man. I tried to type corinfirestorm for your user name and it said invalid url and i was like WTF? and then i went "oh yea!" really loud and people looked at me really strangely... haha. guess it happens that way. anyway, i didn't mean to cop out on you when i said i'd be home on tuesday... it's just that i don't know how much time ima get to spend w/ jill and them cuz ima ... well, ill have to go to ct. etc. and i won't get time to spend... um... prolly don't want to explain. bank fraud is bad? does that explain anything. don't worry about it, i won't get tried for it, cuz of the events surrounding it. but. still screy . sorry. shouldn't be typing about that.i have like 30 sec.' gotta get goin bye love you
Lucifer's Sonata 2005-11-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell.. ^^;; what's not to like? haha I did find it odd (though certainly accepted nods ) that Christian all of sudden turned into a puddle of goo over Michael. lol like..it just seemed so sudden. But then again I'm recovering from a cold and HUGE Andrew Jackson cramming session (which i liked but the cold did nothing for me lol) Anyways, i'll come back later and re-read but that was the only thing that struck me as odd. But it was actually kind of sweet ^^;; as odd as that sounds...but if you take away the creepy but sexy red eyes and the oh-so-present "i am the master you shall obey" it's a cute little story line of "mine and yours" ^.^ very very nice!! Can't wait to see if you take this further (which you should ^.~ ) anyways, great job!! I'm looking forward to reading more!

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