 Deaths.Last.Prayer 2009-08-18 . chapter 10I do indeed love this story, hope that you decide to finish it. |
 Istappen 2009-08-14 . chapter 10This is really good :) Please update soon!! |
 k 2009-04-30 . chapter 10 Aww this story's awesome ^_^
I hope you update really soon
Cant wait to see what happens next |
 xSadistxFujix 2009-01-04 . chapter 10I'm absolutely stinking in love with this story. Its absolutely stinking awsome. The characters are absolutely stinking fantastic and I absolutely stinking can NOT wait for the next chapter!... I think I've said absolutely stinking way to many times, eh? |
 Dramatizer 2009-01-04 . chapter 10“So I was wondering if you wanted to go out [Friday] night. I’m not entirely sure what we’d do but it could be spontaneous.”
(...)
“Okay, well, now that we’ve cleared that up, is Saturday okay?” Tony asked. “I would say Friday but I have work."
That doesn't make sense.
I adore Benjamin. Update soon. |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-12-27 . chapter 10Wow, it took you a year to update...
... That actually kinda impressive. If I did that my characters would disown me forever.
Anyways, I really like this story, but can PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPlz have some action between Tony and the main character! PLZ... (for the life of me I can't remember his name, damnit! I swear I have a diesease that makes me forget people's names...)
So loving how they met! SO CHIBI! -squeal-
Lee |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-12-27 . chapter 2haha, I love their chatspeak. . .
off to read more! |
 Satan's Angelic Mistress 2008-11-30 . chapter 10Aw Ben and Tony are so cute!! ^^
But please, do remember to proof-read, or get someone else to do it? Some of your sentences don't really make sense and take a while to decipher.
And also, please update... and not like a year later? |
 steelydan3 2008-11-26 . chapter 10This story is kinda cute, but I really think you should work on relationships. To me Ben/Tony interaction was like if they were strangers. Probably for the very same reason I think they don't make a very adorable couple. They don't... fit well. But maybe it's just me. And I actually think you can make it better now that they're dating, I don't know.
It's funny that my favorite character is Garret. Usually, I like the narrator the best, but Garret is really... lovely. He's funny and Megan probably likes him too. How can someone NOT like him?
Oh, and just something I probably am too lazy to get: is Seth REALLY straight? Because if he is then he was just fucking with Ben, right? But when they were at the CD store he was all like 'hey, Tony, we were talking about the SAME GUY' like both of them were flirting with Ben.
Well, I think that's all. Please don't take my review as an attack or something. I actually like this story, I like it enought to review it and point its flaws so you can improve. I know you are talented enought for that.
Update soon. :* |
 dot.dash.score 2008-10-06 . chapter 5I agree with Ben.
Cig is very awesomer sounding than Seth.
And I thought Seth was gay, too.
Hm.
And...
I don't like Megan.
Cute story, though.
Update soon? (: |
 Flaming Jello 2008-08-19 . chapter 10Oh WOW! I loved this chapter. Fairly certain that i was new when you dissapeared, so i dont feel too familiar... We should fix this. By which i mean- you should be less lazy(and i know thats hard. Im right there with you) and update soon. So i can love your story even more! Im even thinking of dying my hair blue. I say 'thinking' because the dye hasnt gotten here yet. But Tony is most definately my favorite character. As of now. I relate. Thats a bad thing, i shouldnt relate to fictional characters! But forget it! Im relating whether its good for me or not! But this story is very well written. There are a lot of stories on this site that fail horribly at keeping a constant character... like me! I attempted to write a story... once... Loved the story. Loved the characters. Love Ben's perspective on things- like Pasta! And love you! Please update soon.
Fuzzy White-Blob Attack,
~F-J |
 RRAAAAAACHHHHHHEELLLLLL 2008-08-18 . chapter 10 OMFG I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY, I HAD TO RE-READ IT. I like it still, though. :D GIMME MOAR FADED MANNEQUINS OR WHATEVER THAT ONE IS. AND MOAR OF THIS PLS. and hey did you know in November, Another Gay Movie 2 comes out!? YEAH. IT'S TRUE. |
 CaseyBear 2008-08-18 . chapter 10I was reading the first line of this chapter but then I stopped because I had no clue to what was going on.
I was like, "Have I even read this?"
I went back and read all of the chapters though because I'm me. That didn't really mean anything.
ANYHOW. Wonderful story. |
 Squirrel Activist 2008-06-04 . chapter 9What?
I finally got to the good part and now there aren't any more chapters! Ah!
How can this be! |
 Switch 2007-10-13 . chapter 9Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |