This is really good for a first chapter. Hope to see more soon!

Oh. I think this was creative. I like it alot.

I like how you don't jump into the romance and stuff.

That Tony guy cracked me up.

Me liking this. Tony sounds fun. Tell him I said hi. lol xD

This is cool. I like it well enough. Well enough to come back and see where its going. Nice :)

I wonder why there aren't any reviews yet, because I like it very much. I'm waiting to read who wrote on BEn's desk ... Hopefully Tony?