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| loveheals 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHey! I'm really enjoying your story. I have to say, the little blue car has spiked my interest. Please write the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens! |
| Mrdarcylover 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseIt's interesting, update soon. I want to know who the girl is. |
| sheepep 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusean OKAII story. peace. cutie-ara. |
| Lindsay Marie 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseHey, I love your story so far. Nathan sounds like a really interesting character. He is obviously popular and good looking, and though he once reveled in it, he's become more down to earth. He was also pretty sweet to his sister, and I think that's great. I hope he finds out who the girl in the car is soon! That last line was great, about the car sneaking into his thoughts. Keep going with your story! |