|Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling|
| Melly 3/13/13 . chapter 17
Seriously Analytical or Secretive how many years have it been. I really need an update please pretty please. Yes 7 years come on
| Melly 3/4/13 . chapter 1
Secretive I know that is your pen name but seriously it has been almost six years since you updated this story and it is not fair to leave us hanging like that. Roth and Jane deserve an ending and as a fan I would like to see where this story goes. Please if you are still around please update
| Guest 11/26/12 . chapter 1
I have never needed a story finished as much as this one, please, we're all waiting
| Taiyl 11/21/12 . chapter 17
Please update since this is one of the easy story to finish. It will almost be 5 years since you last update.
| brinalovesyouxx 11/3/12 . chapter 17
Please tell me that that's not the end of the story.. Seeing as you do have a cliffy. Ive read this far and i really would like to continuethe story because its really really really good along with your other stories as Secretive. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon! :D xx
| Revolving Circle 9/5/12 . chapter 17
Honestly, too good. This had me breaking down and crying twice, ugh. Anyways, I love how sort of cliche you made Jane, but honestly, anybody who is mad about that should just be reminded that this is a romance story. I love the super subtle way you point out that Jane and Roth complete each other. Please continue!
| LaserStrike 9/4/12 . chapter 17
Damn you for not updating!
| shrimp27 8/17/12 . chapter 17
COME ON, PLEASE UPDATE SOON? IT'S BEEN LIKE, 5 YEARS! :O
And pretty pretty please update Standing on the Edge and A Lesson in Love 101? Pleeeease! (:
| kruemelvie 6/6/12 . chapter 15
hey, i think you'll not finish this story or? :( i love it so much, i think i read it about 5 times already :)
| Ice Bubble 5/30/12 . chapter 14
I'm sorry that this is the first time I'm reviewing your story, but I just wanted to keep reading. But I was weeping with laughter while I read this chapter. It must have been hilarious writing in Tameka's ignorance. Oyayoi. Genius.
| WonderousTimes 5/29/12 . chapter 8
This chapter was probably my favorite so far; the whole escaping via tree part was very entertaining!
| WonderousTimes 5/28/12 . chapter 5
I love how Usher was added to reasons as to why the party was hell! Made me cackle, haha. :)
| Eiya Weathes 4/8/12 . chapter 17
HOW DARE YOU NOT UPDATE THIS AFTER MANY YEARS. GET YOUR BUTT BACK HERE AND FINISH THE STORY. ALRIGHT?
| Updatenow 2/26/12 . chapter 17
Okay, listen here lady. It's been three years! Three! And you think you can just abandon this amazing story after that kiss? NO! You better get back to this story or else I will get a group of angry people and a bunch of pitchforks and we will find you! I haven't been this into a story in a long time. So think about how upset I was when you left it at that? What the fuck (I usually don't cuss but I'm angry) is going to happen to Roth and Tameka? I NEED TO KNOW! You have a great story so I have no idea why you stop writing! You're an insanely good writer! So you NEED to finish this story or else I might die!
| imwithyou 2/18/12 . chapter 17
i love the story! i know its been awhile since you updated anything, even on your other account, but i would really love for you to continue with this story!