This is very sweet and sad. I like the way you wrote it. A lot. Reading this makes my heat go out to you...

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wow i feel so cold after reading that, so empty, it could be the well written poetry, or it could be that its 20 degrees outside and that im hungery im not sure. But it is well done Wolf Paw

"You've seen to that

and I cannot live without you

My hearts seen to that

but, I will try my best.

If I have any hope of survival,

It's time to close the door to my heart before I lose all feeling. "

By far my favourite part in this whole piece. It's so sad. I wanna go hit that girl, she's missing out.

WOW! Well, as they say, "distance deepens love." I'm not sure if that's appropriate, but that's what I thought of.

What it means it that like if you're away from a person...like if you are far away from a person then you will actually feel closer to them and want them more. So...yeah.

Usually I'm not the poetic type so forgive me for attempting to be.

Good vivid imagery though. Yeah it was OK for me.

X-Eragon-X

I love the imagery of the deep snow here.

slow to the point - I like my poems to have a little more content, a little less repitition over the same subject, but not even I can live up to my standards, so I guess I'm a hypocrite. Just wanted to thank you for the nice review you gave Weird Cruelty, and check out some of your work.

this is unbleivably AWESOME! i just adore the way u wrote this, or rather what u wrote about. yep...it is kinda depressing but its still good. love the way u linked ur emotions 2 the open door. fantastic!

mez

i can see a sort of stage where this poem is set; the lights are dim and there's no color in this world you've depicted. i can really feel the loss, the beauty in mundaneness of a life. very haunting.

nice I liked how you used the door

Wow...that is exactly how I've felt at one time or another. Heartbreak sucks, but you've shown the emotion with such poise. I applaud you for that. Keep on writing!

Oh that was so sad. I like the extended metaphor of the door to your heart and a physical door. Great piece of poetry!

good poem! It painted a picture for me. Also you used the word brittle a very underused word definatly a good choice. Keep up the good work!-fopldr-

That was really good! I liked the metaphor of the door and the cold. All really well used and brilliantly written. Bravo, sir, bravo!

This one is a heart-breaker. I know what's it's like to have the cold wind blow in your face after someone hurts you...

EB

Love is is is good.

I think so any way.

Close the door, mate, there's always porn (hehee).

Nice work

Alan.