Forgive me, I had an account here but I cannot remeber it for the life of me :)So I used my LJ alias!

I got a larger flowy feeling of suspense here. I could feel the banjibender in pursuit.

'A sound more horrible than rusty swings' I liked the wording of that; it really put a mental image...er...sound in my head. It made me think of all other horrible screeching sounds, and how terrible they are. It really got the point across.

I enjoyed this one!