   clair-a-net 2006-07-12 . chapter 7wow this is awsome stuff. what happened to the guys hand was it zynhia or the general who did that? cant wait for more. |
 Evy-Lianda 2006-07-05 . chapter 6I LOVE your story so far PLEASE UPDATE! |
| Evy-Lianda 2006-07-05 . chapter 3 A dark n handsome general...hm...LOVE IT! |
| Evy-Lianda 2006-07-05 . chapter 2 Like the way you write:) |
| Evy-Lianda 2006-07-05 . chapter 1 Nicely written prologue... |
 Azure-Angels 2006-07-05 . chapter 6Please Update! |
| Azure-Angels 2006-07-05 . chapter 3 This story is really good, I also love your other fantasy story,pity you haven't updated in such a long time... |
 FairyTaleLover 2006-07-05 . chapter 1 A Very enticing prologue...It captures the readers attention successfully making them wnat to read on... |
| ... 2006-07-05 . chapter 2 I love the way you write, please, more! |
| ... 2006-07-05 . chapter 2 I love the way you write, please, more! |
| ... 2006-07-05 . chapter 2 I love the way you write, please, more! |
| Me 2006-07-05 . chapter 5 I LOVE YOUR STORY! |
 Trinity of Dreams 2006-01-07 . chapter 4update soon |
 incognitus 2006-01-07 . chapter 4Oh cool! I like the idea of a tall, dark, mysterious, handsome general ;) Can't wait for the next update! |
 Twilight Elf- Maiden 2005-12-28 . chapter 3ooh, a mysterious general. Loves it. Keep it up. |
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