this was truely wonderful. i thouroughly enjoyed it! My thirst tells meto drink these swimming notes,thirsty, I always longto splash into a dense timbre, the intensity of song that, i thought the best part. your words are beautiful. keep up the awesome work!-kae

Love the concept here...though I don't dance, I play violin and I often feel emotionally & sensuously attatched to music making. There were some lines that were awkward to my ear..."Contentment is in the making" perhaps one of them. Also I think that you possibly overuse punctuation...punctuation very often bogs down poetry when used for anything else besides rythem marking. Just opinion of course...keep writing about what you love.