I Really enjoyed this actually. This really made me sit back and think, which is usually impossible. I wasn't listening to 'Bat out of Hell' though, I was listening to Beck's "**", which somehow fit, not that you are an **.
see below 2005-12-07 . chapter 1
Oh. So I've reviewed your stuff before. Eh, in that case, I'll read this again when I have the time and give you a more constructive review. :D
You need to work on your grammar and writing style. I wish I could elaborate, but after giving a similar review over and over, I... just... grow tired of it.