nice alliteration im a big proponent of it myself...being from the frozen north im impressed with the captured walk up the frigid drive...the whole thing for some reason brought to mind Wuthering Heights and Lockwood's walk to Heathcliff's home. interesting ideas...smooth flow. very nice.

Michael

very consistent, I like that, a clear image or more accurately, a sensation conveyed with clear imagery which unfolds bit by bit to revel the story and the sentiment, without resorting to abstract and unfathomable leaps, it flowed very well, good work.

Wow, that was beautiful. I love the message the "words on the wind" bring in particular. Also, your descriptive phrases of movement are lovely and you never repeat yourself in this poem, which I admire. Well done!

WOW! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM! I love the narrative style and the deep wintery imagery. I love your use of repetition of words and chilly wording. I love the whispering of the wind and the the point of view you used. This is an AMAZING poem!

Imaginative and well-detailed. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.