   Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 27Love this. Beautiful imagery. Very trippy, but lovely. It's musical. :D
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| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 26 Nice imagery. I like the line: "I used to know what the sane man meant." |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 25 Lovely imagery, nice poem. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 24 This is nice, but I don't know quite what to make of it either. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 23 DOn't know what to make of this... |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 22 Interesting. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 21 I like the first five lines, but I can't agree with the last one. For me, life is very much not death. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 20 Don't know what to say about this one... |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 19 "Carpeting the imagination" Lovely. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 18 Ooh, interesting choice of words in the last two lines. Nice voice. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 17 Nice imagery. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 16 Interesting. I think I'd need to think about that before I completely understood it. :D |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 15 Don't know quite what to make of this... |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 14 Nice. "Leaving bootprints" I like that bit. Love the ending. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 . chapter 13 Oh I like this one. Nice Alice in Wonderland analogy. :D |
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