|Reviews for Razorblades and Bracelets|
| Bushwah 4/2/12 . chapter 1
That is major disturbing
| Page Marion 12/1/05 . chapter 1
You may have written this in your boredom but it has some potential because it is clearly emotional and poignant. I would perhaps extend the metaphor of ribbons further through the poem, not alluding to the character having cut herself but using this as a method of dress, of- in some sick way- making herself feel beautiful. think of it. Beauty, at least the cosmetic effects of clothing, mask pain and self consciousness. This is a huge reason cutting and suicide happens- the lack of conformity to an impossible standard.
| someone 12/1/05 . chapter 1
| a lonely september 12/1/05 . chapter 1
"Her body a roadmap of pain," this was very real&it seems like it's reality to practically everyone these days... it's pretty sad, was well-written. nice job.