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Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-05-15 ch 14,	abuseit was great! i loved the plot and the characters~
Freak Perfume 2008-04-03 ch 14,	abuseHi there, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story. It was a compelling read with wonderful, engaging characters. A gem, one I am glad I stumbled on. Well done, you are a talented writer and I am glad I found you.
i-see-faeries 2008-03-24 ch 14,	abuseAw, how cute. I spent a while reading this, and now I'm behind on school work. But you know, so worth it. Great job. This is completely unqiue and cute. I love Zoe, and everyone else. Great job.
Kasee Lara 2008-02-21 ch 14,	abuseLoved this story, it was extremely cute and the psychic background was very well played. Nicely planned too, how the beginning tied in with the plot and such. All very lovely. Any plans for a sequel?
JtheChosen1 2008-01-19 ch 14,	abuseawesome story! the different character's and their personalities were probably my faveorite part!
Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-01-19 ch 14,	abuseI wasn't going to review... but then I thought about what an awesome story this is and decided to be a kind person (if you consider vague criticism kindness). I adore the characters but the plot was the high point for me in this story. I at least understand a bit of the psychic stuff (were you going off actual stuff or did you make it up?), since I've got a friend who's a tarot reader/psychic and I read chakras (although personally she's the only one who thinks that counts). Anyway, it was some of the most fun reading I've done in a while, even if it is almost 4:30 in the morning. Anyway, onto criticism! Again, my critique stands from the last story - I nearly missed huge parts of the story because certain things weren't reinforced with detail to keep me focused. The comment with the dialogue and periods still stand; try using commas instead of periods. A new comment is that you rely on adverbs and it feels a bit repetitive. It would have been nice to see a couple more similes and metaphors instead. Other than that it was an absolutely story!
RealityIsRealitive 2008-01-19 ch 14,	abuseI absolutely loved this story. It was addictive. I couldn't stop reading. Litteraly. I stayed up past 4 am reading it, and let me tell you, that is WAY past my bedtime. The only critique I can think of is that it was a little odd that all of the main characters are gay. But thats ok. It works.
gummybaby 2008-01-09 ch 14,	abuseI'm in love with this story...
Erisah Mae 2007-12-10 ch 14,	abuseThis was extremely enjoyable- very nice work on your characterizations and the relationships between them. You created a very authentic and gripping story- I couldn't put it down! Brilliant. Erisah p.s. feel free to swing by my page to check out some of my stuff- I'd love to have your opinion on it... but no pressure. ;)
windy girl 2007-11-23 ch 14,	abuseYou have great characterization. After sifting through dozens of stories today, this one has got to be one of the best I've read. Your characters actually seemed like people (with personalities), and the relationships went at what felt like a natural pace. Which is pretty awesome, I think. Mmkay. So good job. -pb
jaybriel 2007-09-09 ch 14,	abuseThat was so sweet! It's fantastic that Zoe still manages to keep his personality, only too often do you end up with your antisocial, angry types ending all mushy after they fall in love, but Zoe is still Zoe (even if he is softening up). I'm really sad that it's over, but you can't really end it there with that whole, Davie and Zoe are brothers thingy? Can you? Ah well, if this is the ending then it was really beautiful (relationship dynamic is so unique - not that it's the only nice-happy-kinda-guy-meets-angry-sullen-kinda-guy fic around, but because you've written it so well and made it work!) Cheers!
lilylupin7 2007-09-07 ch 14,	abuseGood story and I now I realize why Bren keeps noticing the similarities between Zoe and Davie... At times though, the shift in POV (or a time skip in general) is confusing because you don't leave a big enough gap in between paragraphs to emphasize a change in topic and/or POV
Annwyl 2007-05-01 ch 13,	abuseSquee! The first time I came across this I got sucked in. It's a wonderful whirlwind vortex of goodness. The plot is fantastic, I love how everything is tied to everything else. I like now there's mushy moments, and funny parts and "omfg" parts too. Great job. I can't, CAN'T wait for the Epilogue to be posted. And you do realise that you've been writing this for a good 7 ** months, so I'm waiting, but not too patiently. I also will check your LJ, if you don't mind, just because I absolutely need to know the complete ending for this. Added to favourites list and alerts. UPDATE SOON!
GinnyYvette 2006-11-15 ch 13,	abuseAww I just found this story and I loved it! Zoe is so cute! I can't wait for the epilogue :) .:Kat:.
Imaginary Rose 2006-10-23 ch 13,	abuseBest story EVER! Please update soon, I can't wait to see how this ends. I love Cay, Bren, and Zoe. The part that I like best is that through it all, despite everything, no one acted sappy (crying over everything). EXCELLENT! Like I said before update soon. autumnaura

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