Oh, Cay. You're so cheekyhehe

We never learned Bren's power...awww.. But this was a good story!

Aww this was such a great story and I loved it. Great job! :D

Loved it. Plain as that.

Good story!

cuute story. bravo!

cae is so cute! often, he's just comic relief, but i love him!

i think you should either do a sequal or a collection of random snipits of their lives from them on. like i dunno Bren's power :3 but i loved this and will forever love it.

T O

I can't believe he still ended up working in the institution again! Urgh! But I guess ok since Greg now runs it and he's cool.

I'm ridiculously curious about what Davie ended up doing with his life since he needs a job and stuff.

And Cay and Luke are love. Absolutely adorable!

I really loved this story, definitely going into my favorites!

For a bit of critiquing, it would be /immensely/ helpful if you put in page breaks or some type of symbol divider when you're changing scenes, I sometimes got a bit lost and had to re-read the previous paragraph to figure out that, yes, the scene did change. But overall an excellent story! Zoe is awesome

Zoe beat up a superior O.O...it guess it seems that what he does. Bren and Cay are best friends with benfits XD

he cooks when he's angry o.o. idk how many people do that these days anymore. It's a good habit though than taking your anger out on something else

wow I really loved your story! Extremely interesting. I loved the character Zoe! He was really cool (probably on my top ten favorite characters list) Wow, loved the story! yeah. D

-Nick

aww cute ending i liked ur story

I really enjoyed this story. I love love love the characters of Zoe and Bren and Cay. My only criticism is that Davie and Zach seemed to get together really fast. But other than that, everything about it was just great. And the plot really worked, like, I was so interested and it wasn't just some contrived way to get them together, but a really cool idea.