I really enjoyed this story. I love love love the characters of Zoe and Bren and Cay. My only criticism is that Davie and Zach seemed to get together really fast. But other than that, everything about it was just great. And the plot really worked, like, I was so interested and it wasn't just some contrived way to get them together, but a really cool idea.

I love this story, and I'm sad it's ending, but now I can read all your other stories. Yay!! :)

that is so sweet...I think

...I'm confused as to what Greg is doing with Zoe...

wel...that's a quick end...no great battle? oh well, that's how Zoe would do it anyways.

I like this, it is very informative.

ok, so Jakob basically killed Zoe's mentor, but why else does Zoe hate him?

this Preston guy seems like the bad guy.

Wait...when did Zoe get out?

niceness

I love how fast paced this story is...it is actually giving me an adrenaline rush...

Poor Zoe...and Bren for all the trouble this mysterious man will bring.

poor Zoe...I'm not quite sure what is wrong...but poor him anyways. And why is Cay flirting with the doctor when He and Bren are dating?! And why is Bren ok with it?!

heh heh, I love this story so much!

that is so cute! and it is kinda sad...though I don't know why.