   laughter at the funeral 2006-05-20 . chapter 1"the veil hides the tears/and no one knows better"...that's really nice...you did a really good job in this...
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 Made in Britain 2006-04-17 . chapter 1This is really good. Why is she happy at a funeral? Kind of creepy, I like it! |
| Pink Sparrow 2005-12-01 . chapter 1 I love it! I love the imagery and the concept behind it and everything. This is so good. |
| ciara cathleen 2005-12-01 . chapter 1 The imagery is very nice in this one. |
| BJ Worth 2005-12-01 . chapter 1 Great description. Paints a nice picture |
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