holy holy hell. o-m-g, ur so good. wow. that left me in awe. it was so quick and fast paced but still so brilliant. ihearthearthearted it. and i loved the end and the beginning and just.. all of it. and the way u tracked through her life so quickli yet so effectiveli -beautiful.

girl, you've left me in awe. and i am so making my sister read this. :P

beautiful. & extremely sad, too. 'teach me how to fly, i'll teach you how to fall' that's just gorgeous right there, i envy you to think of that. it was so beautiful, the story you told, all the pain & everything. i loved the theme of wanting to be able to fly. at first i thought it was wandering towards the ending, seemed like one of those things you don't plan, it just kinda seeps out of you. but good, i liked it. it was extremely sad towards the ending. . . nice job.

Aw, so sad. Powerful portrayal of emotions, really well written. I like the parallelism in the plot, the way Cinderelly as an escape is linked to the boyfriend as an escape, and the way she loses both of them thorugh different forms of "motherhood". You use good imagery and symbolism, such as "her fake jewel ripping into my fake mask of courage". I'm usually not much of a reader of fiction, more poetry, but thid really impressed me.

"Now, I stood on the roof of the building. The sky had never looked prettier. 'Goodbye, cruel world, it's been a pleasure..."

I could have cried when the girl's mom ripped up "Cinderella"... and the ending was great; especially how you had described her views on the sky at the beginning... it tied in perfectly with the last part.

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.

Hi! I just read this entire thing and the only word that comes up to me to describe this story is beautiful. You have captured her emotions and her thoughts really well. I love it! Great job!

Bye,

RV

Tears prickled in my eyes as I read this...first at Cinderella...but I hadn't seen the whole boyfriend aspect coming.

Just wow. You didn't need to go into unneccassary details, I could feel the story with the minimilistic details you used, and the way it was written really made it come alive.

I can so relate to her! All that pressure from family to be the 'perfect daughter'. Even with friends, it's like you're playing a role. Lights, camera, action!

The ending's sad! The BASTARD! Sleeping around?

Anyway, let me know whenever you write another short story or anything. I'm trying to get inspired again, and it's really not working by reading 'The Big Book of Biology'. Until later...

Luv And Peace

PS. Thanks for reviewing my story!

how deep. i love it. it represents something. can't wait til' the next chapter.

OMG!

That is... tragic. Perhaps the angel she's been waiting for will catch her mid-way through her fall... and she will truly fly...

Wow, this is so amazing. Very sad, and I just love it.

good. very intense. but does this mean you're not goin to continue Nothing To Lose? : (

Amazingly..deep..and..really good..I'm sorry, incoherent answers seem to be a theme today..

but it was very good, and well written together.

Wow... I really liked this piece. Maybe because, for some reason, it reminds me of my own mood right now:) Anyway, I enjoyed it and I think I shall bookmark it...

OMG! I loved it! I really did. Even in just a prologue, I got to our main character's mind. It's lovely, update soon

: this is so good, it made me cry! how do you put so much emotion in *shakes fist at you for being so good* meh keep writing mon petite chou!