|Reviews for Why?|
| BrokenHeartedAngel 4/21/07 . chapter 1
mm good job i like this!
| theoretically beautiful 9/24/06 . chapter 1
"I never thought I would ever lose you,I never thought this moment would come true." ahh hindsight. Very nice.
| je suis une pomme du terre 7/28/06 . chapter 1
Unfortunately I don't think anyone understands why people leave the ones they love... humans are just stupid that way... I totally understand this one as well . You are so awesome! You're going to be famous someday, i can tell. *puts on big sunglasses like a celeb* CASHING! Haha... lol... o You're going to read manga? WAHH! I need to get some more T.T o.o Do you read Dnangel? cant wait til the new one comes out in september ... *clicks the fav authors button* This is fun .
| tamarkaph2006 7/21/06 . chapter 1
Is this about losing someone through death or the breakup of a love relationship? I liked the line about making lemons into lime.
| Kristina Suko 7/18/06 . chapter 1
Very emotional- So sad... I hate it when people leave, especially loved ones. D Maranwe
| foreverlostinmyownlitttleworld 6/8/06 . chapter 1
awsome poem very powerful I love it
| magnusthewolf 5/21/06 . chapter 1
i like this one a lot. great job. very emotional and heartfelt. nice job! :)
| Morwain 5/10/06 . chapter 1
interesting this was good i liked
| owned-pride 4/28/06 . chapter 1
In a way, it's saddening. In another, it's pretty. I know I'm odd. Just something I thought you would like to know.
| Southern Fantasy 4/12/06 . chapter 1
Awesome! it holds alot of truth. Great job! you're really talented!
| Gavotte 3/3/06 . chapter 1
great job. keep up the good work. i can almost see this poem come true
| mint cookie 2/18/06 . chapter 1
Cute. And sad. Which is an interesting combination.
I think this would make a really good freestyle.
| Kenshinswife 12/2/05 . chapter 1
I love the line, "I only wish I could take hose lemons and make sweet lime." It's really creative and cool, I like the depressing theme.