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Reviews For: True Serenity

Pharaoh-Serenity
2007-04-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was a beautiful piece of work.
Eire Rain
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseThis was really amazing. Wonderful, vivid description! Thank you so much for the review you left on Equinox. It meant so much to me that it affected you. My goal for the story was to make people see the gray area in abusive relationships, so that abused men and women would not have the stigma of being weak for not leaving. And I'm really glad you saw that. Thank you!

-Sarah
monkeygirl300016
2005-12-22
ch 1,
abuseWOW. I like it.
Hell's first Icicle
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abusebeautiful wording... carries the emotions thruogh relli well, very powerful. the last line really brought it off, though. i loved it. the whole thing, but mostly th last line. >.
Changethesubject
2005-12-01
ch 1,
abuseoh i love the title. 'true serenity' - good work. i like the imagery in the poem too, its very powerful and strong. i love the last line - it finishes it off beautifully.
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