That was a beautiful piece of work.

This was really amazing. Wonderful, vivid description! Thank you so much for the review you left on Equinox. It meant so much to me that it affected you. My goal for the story was to make people see the gray area in abusive relationships, so that abused men and women would not have the stigma of being weak for not leaving. And I'm really glad you saw that. Thank you!

-Sarah

WOW. I like it.

beautiful wording... carries the emotions thruogh relli well, very powerful. the last line really brought it off, though. i loved it. the whole thing, but mostly th last line. >.

oh i love the title. 'true serenity' - good work. i like the imagery in the poem too, its very powerful and strong. i love the last line - it finishes it off beautifully.