this poem was very interesting, i love how you capture the whole thing.(hey, this make a ryhme!) Anyway, i like it! and in respond to your review in my work "To you all", actually i'm not refering to the whole reviewer, i'm refering to the girl who gave me my first review..so thats why i wrote 'she'... =) anyway, thx for your review!

Lots of Love, Hugs n Kisses

trigger happy, that's right. the last parts were sinister... o.O with all the rubbish that goes on these days... but would a child have much money? i was thinking along the lines of terrorists and all that stuff that comes out in the news... but shutterbugs manage to take some amazing photos. remind me to tell you the address - i found this nice site of quite nice photos.

Hm, interesting. There's something about this poem that's obsessive and manic - particularly with the want of a perfect image in the beginning. The death of the child later was dramatically ironic, his smiling the only defence and protest against the world.