Another songlike poem but this i must admit is beautiful. I don't quite get the curveball thing though...

i like this.. very sweet.. i really love the idea of a curveball.. cool

OMG! I really love that poem! That was touching! You've got talent! Keep it up!BROTHER

Bittersweet - tinged with a love that's too sad to confront head on, but lovely all the same in its want of the moment to go on forever. I particularly liked the third verse.

Spellbinding and beautifully written. Nice structure. I enjoyed reading this over and over. Fantastic job. TWIG COG SOG