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| sporkofdoom 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI might have reviewed this twice because my computer is dysfunctional, if so, I apologize. The imagery here is breathtaking, beautiful. Well done. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusewow, i loved all of it. |
| ayadora 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseused to be beautiful, huh? behind camera lenses, puddle under a streetlamp, incoherent... it all comes together. I don't believe in an afterlife. don't believe in crushes, either. good work. |
| burlesque muse 2005-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it. it is an amalgamation of everything that your poetry is. it is absolutely divine. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm floored! I never know what to say to juicy poems like this. It was breathtaking, it took me for a ride, it made me long for things that hurt too much. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| a lonely september 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abusecrushes rock. flutters&obsessing is just... thrilling to me. anyway, aboiut the poem, this was awesome. so beautiful&pretty. i loved the verse about starving artists&the one about the pictures. beautiful. |