Beautiful poem. Though it's sad i like it. So sweet. (:

The poem works so well romantically at the beginning but then becomes sad, but that is cool.

I like the flow of this poem. It's so sweet in the beginning, and when I find out it's only a dream, it gets depressing. However, I think the end is a bit abrupt, especially the last line. It just doesn't seem to go well with the rest of the poem. Well, that's only my opinion. But overall, it's a good poem.

I like this, it's short but sweet. It really reminds me of the song 'on my own' in Les Miserables, the musical. You've really captured to feeling of wanting someone so much but not being able to have them. You seem pretty talented to me, so I'll check out some of your other stuff (I hope you have some!!) Myabe you could do me a huge favour and check out my story which is called 'Title: Unknown' I'd love your opinon on it!!

All in all a really nice poem. Well done! Hit me back sometime!