not bad. kind of random, but not bad. i don't really understand the stag changing into a man, but then again, i'm not very imaginative...okay, maybe i am imaginative, i just don't undertand that little bit. good poem, i hope to read more of your work soon.

four words... I love this poem. that's it... I love the flow of it, it comes togeather really nicely.anatheliaPS: please R&R mine, it would mean alot to me.