These are more the kind of poems I like because they're longer and more involved and seem to have taken much more effort ...

-You haven’t made it passed your infancy- I think that should be 'past' instead of 'passed.'

The poem started to slip away from me a bit in the middle around the time of crystals and milky gazes, but then I seemed to get back on track with the last few lines when the same imagery as in the beginning returned to me.

And speaking of imagery, the imagery is very good in this one. Very bizarre and strange, but that's not really unexpected considering who the author is. And I mean that as a compliment. The rhythm is pretty good, too.

But what were you thinking with that last line? It's horrible. It's like a puzzle piece that's swollen and three times too big for the rest of the puzzle/poem.

But if I ignore that very last line, then I actually like this poem. Nice job.

that's horrible! well, it's a good poem, but a horrible story. but I like it

omg this was amazing. "You’re who the fuck you think you are" lol very true and very strong. you are who you are.

Ok I'll be honeset I have no idea what the hell that poem was about. But kept getting all these trippy images of some loony staring into a jagged piece of mirror and cutting people, all while yelling 'I am who I am'. It was a cool poem though even if the message escapes my tiny little mind.