   blu-carrot 2005-12-02 . chapter 1Simple and amusing. A refreshing break from many too-deep poems you see popping up all over the place. Nice job. |
 scathingreviewer 2005-12-02 . chapter 1Rating 1 through 10 1 beng crap 10 being the bestI give this a 8(good)All i can say is good poetryEmail if u have q's about this review
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 LauraKM 2005-12-02 . chapter 1Brilliance, pure and simple. |
 BJ Worth 2005-12-02 . chapter 1Lol. Very funny. |
 phthalo blue 2005-12-02 . chapter 1This made me laugh. Great title. |
 sunday night sky 2005-12-02 . chapter 1nice work; made me smile. great haiku. |
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