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Reviews for 7:32 PM
BJ Worth 12/2/05 . chapter 1
Hm, very sad. Interesting with the exact times in there.
phthalo blue 12/2/05 . chapter 1
Great poem. The repetition of "I couldn't move, I couldn't speak, I couldn't breathe" adds to the emotions. Sorry.