really lovely piece again, you have a way with innocence in poetry, very hopeful and yet scared. I love it, its a good mix of emotions. the chorus is brilliant. keep it up FF

very flowing, interseting point you make here. It gives sort of a good metaphorical...hell, i don't know where i'm going with this, but great job.

from what i've read, you write inspired 'inspired' poetry, (does that make sense?)

it's just explodes with positive imagery, and leaves me feeling refreshed and giddy.

destined for great things? i certainly hope so!

I like it... very inspiring!

What a nice upbeat poem. Thanks so much for writing this! It sure cheered me up.:D Go girl, and may you reach the highest and brightest star in the big wide galaxy...:) Good job! Thanks for reviewing!

heyy, why'd you end it so soon? It was just getting there! I like this song. it does show determination and the 'reach for the stars' parts are the best and pull the song together. You should probably extend it. Nice job,

Wishdreamer89

I liked it a lot. Very optimist and hopeful. It shows that no matter what life throws, she's going to make it through and fulfill her dreams. You used interesting words to tell the story also. Good job!

everythings so that or i needed to get out of my little clouded world of pessimism.

i like it, hopeful.

This is great, very inspirational. I like it a lot, well written. Thanks for your reviews! QueenVixta

Nice song, very inspirational. Like an anthem for the optomistic