I really like this piece. It has power unto its own..."i love you" is such an overused phrase that people really don't seem to realize how powerful it is. Very well done.

i was wondering about the format, it actually has a good effect to it. anyway, the poem's good and i liked it. the whole descructive/beauty theme was awesome, too. great job.

Really great idea, very clever.

i really liked this. beautifully written.