This was so refreshingly original.
I love the concept.
Good job!

Aah! "If they had lived"!!
Lol nice twist on Happy Ever After And All Is Well And The Happy Couple Apparently Is Perfect...Annoyingly Perfect.
~Music

This is interesting. Especially how each sentence starts with 'and' but I like it.

Mary, you should make this into a story! It would be really good. Strange. And maybe a little morbid...but very good. Oh and by the wya, you still haven't sent me that story yet...I hope you haven't forgotten about the Spitting Camels. Just becasue you haven't seen them yet doesn't mean they're there! Oh yes, they're watching your every move, so send it me. And update your Sir Rong story.

oh come on... you've got a great set of one-liners here. write me a dang story! Write it with all the sarcasm and anger of a fantasy writer trying to break the mold! Let the bitterness flow, man!

That's horrible! I mean that in a good way, of course (if that makes any sense XD). I especially love that last line "And they might have lived happily, if indeed, they had lived.".

a tad morbid today, are we?