hi

this story is frickin hilarious, please continue!

but some of its a little wierd and its getting a bit dramatic but its really good!

xx

Wow, really good stuff :D
Your writing style reminds me alot of Scott Westerfield;really dry sense of humor and whatnot.
Seeing the date this was last updated, I'm gonna assume your done with this? You should seriously continue it!

OH. CRAP. Nice ending there...

:) CD

Hm. Another, this time less bizarre, chapter flies away.
Before, I've noticed in fiction (in general) there are few attempts to add authors comments directly into the text--I'm sure you know what I mean. In web fiction, it's quite a bit more common.
In this case, it serves to strengthen the comedy. I don't know if this was your intention, but it does.
I can't think of anything to add, except welcome back to the living. And I'm waiting for the next chapter--what the blazes is this tale going to become, anyway?
Koin

an update?! Yay!

The only thing that I noticed about this...other than the sheer brilliance, of course, was that you had some tense errors in the first paragraph. Some of your words were in present tense, and the rest of the story was in the past.

Too bad I'm not the 100th reviewer, though 99 isn't bad...because I have fanart.

I can't believe I'm doing this.

Ok...I got bored one day, and you'd put up the pictures on your livejournal, so I drew them. Vergil and Iris. Kind of. the resemblence is kind of there, loosely...and I apoligize for Vergil. I learned how to draw guys after this was drawn. and the markers bled...don't even get me started with the markers. They scanned like crap. The colors are off and, I'm so sorry...it's much prettier in real life.

anyway, the url is

http: //i26 . /albums /c102 /starcub101 /MF .jpg

there are spaces just in case. I'll try and draw a better one, if I have the time. I just...I don't know.

Congrats on 25 chapters, and please update soon!

I'm going to go bury my head in the sand now.

-Mephistophelian

Thanks fir the tip, I guess. If I'm ever in real trouble, I'll try going goth. Heh heh

Vergil in...a pink bow tie? My eyebrows have touched my hairline.My only other comment is yet another concerning your writing style. You obviously have quite a bit of experience in writing, or you think extremely quickly, or you work better at 1 in the morning than most of the rest of the creative writing population. While being utterly kooky, positively backwards and somewhat difficult to understand (it's the updating thing) this story nevertheless has two rather solid characters--who, gee gads, ACT LIKE THEY ACTUALLY HAVE PERSONALITIES of their own--and a storyline that stays together. While that's not unique for a story, it is for one as nuts as this. Kudos once again.I wonder how long this tale actually is...it doesn't drag, but...well, awaiting the next update.Kolostramin

Iris didn't respond all to well to this magical revelation, did she? Or maybe she reacted extremely well by escaping? Ohh, I won't know till I read the next chapter won't I? Oh well, another day I'll now the answer. This was just a warm up, next time I'll read even more chapters before submmting a review. (Although I can't make that promise since if each chapter keeps getting even more interesting than the next, I might as well end up reviewing every chapter) Heh heh. Till next time!

oh piffle. NOT GOOD!

hee... their very bad acting was pretty funny.

:) CD

OH NOES! It's Rowan!

Speaking, of whom, you do have to kill someone to get into that whole little cult thing, right? Or at least, that's what I gathered from something Vergil or Leonora or somebody or the other said way back when. That makes me wonder who Rowan killed...

Err. Anyway, I probably say this a whole lot, but this is one of the funniest chapters you've put out in a while. The beginning part was especially great, with Vergil looking all **/metrosexual and all that.

Aa-yand, I like how Miss Iris seems to be devloping. It's like she's got a lot more pluck than before. And stuff. SO YAH, update soon!

An update! OMGWTFBBQ YAY!

but...a cliffhanger? T.T

Awesome as always. And there's even some character development for Vergil. I've said it before, but your sense of humor is priceless. I love the way you write, because it really comes through clearly. This is an amazing work, please update soon!

-Mephistophelian

My first act, upon reading this, was to wonder if you actually know you're writing what you're writing. This is the most bizarre, loopy, crazy, psyched-out bonkers insane DT inducing story I've ever read. My eyeballs are making odd circuits of the room as I attempt to comprehend what exactly is happening. Unfortunately, I don't believe going back to the beginning would help much, as I'd just get confused all over again.I'm confusedly (scratching the headedly) waiting for the next update.As for the Jewish conspiracy, until that A/N, I was going to ask "What the hell is that?" And the wacked-out thing is...the Author's Note didn't explain a thing.Gibildiflapitoonarkoblak,Kolostramin

eep! Whattaya wanna bet this'll go wrong too?

Ah well that's what makes it fun.

XD CD

Omg, I love your story! It's so funny and it's really well written!!

Great start for this chapter. Mm.. glad to see that the advance of their romantic relationship :)