I love the contradictions, the images...nice pen name. Deutsch, no? I am learning the language, slowly, anyway. Well keep writing.

This is really a beautiful poem Hawke! I like it a lot!

Much love, Rosanna.

Sad and beautiful. I liked the image it painted in my mind as I read.

Really liked the last two lines. Sorry to hear what happened hunni...guys are just butts most of the time, aren't they? :( *big hug*

this was beautiful. it has wonderful meaning! i loved the part about the trailing paths of blooddown a twisted facethat was wonderful! thank you for an excellant poem. -kae

I hope that everyone can find someone that can heal and fix us, make us happy and understand them.

I like this poem though this line (the second one) is awkward.

"in hopes of having it protectedby someone you says they love me"

Besides that line it is a very good poem.

beautifully written.