That's cool! ^_^ Awesome song! Keep it up!

~Anna~

yes, I know the feeling, and I think you did a great job expressing that emotion into song (I am guessing that it is a song, by the verse and Chorus indications). A pleasure to read.

this was good. i really liked the part about messing up new chances that was brilliante! sometimes your rhyme faded and sometimes it was strained but alltogether you had a great song! thank you!-kae

from what i can tell i like it, though not spectacular, then again i'd have to here it to music, so my opinion on flat verse isnt much. in basic, as a poem i dont like it but i think id like it as a song if i heard your chords