Loved those thee lines: "There's insanity in stars,

cover them up and hide.

Don't you see I'm beautiful?"

The kool-aid thing is a little...awkward. Was that intentional?

wow... all i have to say is that this was pretty fucking awesome. nice job. : )

Simply beautiful to read.

I love it. Achingly sad yet still keeps this aura of wonder and beauty. You are a master at using words to convey emotions.

the summary drew me in but the poem drowned me in ecstasy.

every word was so beautifully placed...

blew me away.

Keep writing.