That was very thought provoking!

THIS IS AMAZING! I've read old farts who can't write that good and at the time you were only 14! It's so beautiful, I absolutely love the amazing detail. I love it!

Wow... Amazing write, I enjoyed this very much. Words well spoken. Brillant work.

this is so true...you are really a great writer...i love the ending lines especially

Wow! That was really good! I've never read a story quite like it!