Really liked it...it's great that he's there for you when you need him and your writing is just very well written!

I remember when you first read this to me and I was so surprised that the hooded man was your father, it is really a beautiful poem. Did you ever read it to your dad? He sounds like the mysterious guy everyone wants to marry, lol. Love it, of course!

aww (y do your poems allways make me say tahat?) I think evrey father wishes for daughter to write something as beautiful as this. Good work

that was good i like

Allo allo. Well written, I enjoyed it a great deal(though I'm not really into poetry..which is a MAJOR compliment to you) What I loved was just how relaxed most of it feels, in some you feel loneliness but most of all you bring out realization that there is someone that will always be there for you! And trust me, you'll need him. Like most out there, I'm sure you'll fall many times, but learn for the better!

good job.

-New Testament-(Paladin Van Exday)

oh description! this is well written, eloquent and sweet...of course dad's are the best...

Sounds like you have a great relationship with your parents! That's awesome. I like the poem... very good.

This is your best poem by far. I love it. I wish I had a father like this... Great job!

Beautifully Done!

Beautifully written. I love your imagery. Good job.