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| Cirien Phoenix 2006-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting idea. We need more people like this. Drunk drivers kill too many people. Even without that aspect a woman hunting a killing people sounds like fun. Well written. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "The Problem With Our Youth." I said people were allowed to disagree with me and it appears you have. Here's my reply to your review. No, I'm not a scientologist. I don't believe we descended from aliens as they do. Nor do I follow any form of religion or belief written by L. Ron Hubbard. Though it is other people's business about drinking and drugging up, it does cause problems. Rape, violence, and general killing of braincells is a problem for our youth and that's why those are listed. Also, I'm no old, nor am I a guy. Although I do think I would've enjoyed living in the "the good ol' days when men were men." I'm not sure why you'd want to declare war on my college. If you disagree with their drinking, then your statement about drinking being their business is no longer valid. If you think they don't drink enough then you certainly don't understand these people. If you think they should be using more drugs, then please see above statement. If you think they use too much, then that goes back to your possibly invalid statement about it being their business. And although you feel you sounded harsh, I accept your semi-apology you put at the beginning of the sentence in the review, but I've heard worse from others. Perhaps you missed the sentence, but I did state that people who REALLY DO NEED MEDICINE FOR ACTUAL MEDICAL CONDITIONS are not included in the youth whose problems are made my unnecessary prescriptions. It's unfortunate to hear about your need for psychiatric meds, but since you said you really do need them, I'm not calling you an ignorant youth, but instead hope that perhaps someday you don't need them. If that's not possible, then I wish you the best in life. Glad to have gotten a counterpoint for some thought on my topic. ~Cirien |
| the wind is crying 2006-07-05 ch 13, | abuseWow. That story really makes you think. I certainly sympatise with Judy, which is a hard thing to write. I think Mikhail is the most interesting character and I'd love to see more from his perspective. |
| dbz 77 2006-03-26 ch 13, | abuseYou wrote a very thought-provoking story here.I wonder what the defense attorney's take on this will be? Would the defense argue that the killings were justified on the premise that driving drunk poses an imminent threat to life and limb? |
| Carradine 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseGod I hate you. |
| Bianca3000 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseincredible! I loved it!You are a great writer.Keep writing! :) |
| z-wad 2005-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats... a small fucking story..i assume ur adding on ? Its a good idea i suppose,you'll just ahve to build suspense and shit onto the story to make the idea last... |
| Darket 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWell, I can't really put down an opinion on this yet because I'm still a little confused. I sort of do remember this story from "Flashback." I hope you update soon. |